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Good work on the Sum component's core logic. However, changes are needed because two key requirements were not met.

First, in src/App.jsx, you are explicitly passing 0 for props that should be omitted. The goal was to test the component's default prop functionality. Please adjust these calls to <Sum a={10} />, <Sum b={5} />, and <Sum /> as required by the task.

Second, the string rendering in src/components/Sum/Sum.jsx violates a checklist item [CHECKLIST ITEM #2]. It should be refactored to use a single template literal for better readability:

<p>{`Sum of ${a} and ${b} is ${a + b}`}</p>

Please address these points to complete the task.


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src/App.jsx Outdated
{/* And remove commented lines :) */}
<Sum a={2} b={3} />
<Sum a={-5} b={5} />
<Sum a={10} b={0} />

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The requirement is to render a Sum component with just a = 10. You should omit the b prop and let the Sum component use its default value.

src/App.jsx Outdated
<Sum a={2} b={3} />
<Sum a={-5} b={5} />
<Sum a={10} b={0} />
<Sum a={0} b={5} />

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According to the task description, this Sum component should be rendered with just b = 5. The a prop should not be passed, allowing the default prop value to be used.

src/App.jsx Outdated
<Sum a={-5} b={5} />
<Sum a={10} b={0} />
<Sum a={0} b={5} />
<Sum a={0} b={0} />

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This Sum component should be rendered with 'no params at all'. Instead of explicitly passing 0 for a and b, you should remove the props entirely.

// export const Sum = () => ();
export const Sum = ({ a = 0, b = 0 }) => (
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Sum of {a} and {b} is {a + b}

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This violates checklist item #2: 'Use string interpolation inside tag content'. While your code works, the good example in the checklist suggests using a single template literal for better readability, like {Sum of ${a} and ${b} is ${a + b}}.

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Excellent work on implementing the Sum component! You've correctly handled the props and default values within the component itself. However, a change is needed in src/App.jsx. The task requires you to test the default props by calling the component with no props at all. Your current implementation uses <Sum b={0} />, which doesn't fully test the default behavior for both props. To fix this, please update that line to be simply <Sum />. This will ensure all requirements are met.


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<Sum a={-5} b={5} />
<Sum a={10} />
<Sum b={5} />
<Sum b={0} />

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The task requires a Sum component with 'no params at all' to test the default values for both props. This line should be <Sum /> instead.

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I am approving this submission as an educational override so you can move forward, but please take a moment to review this feedback.

Excellent work on the Sum component! It's implemented perfectly, and you correctly added the <Sum /> instance to test the default props. The only remaining issue is a small leftover in src/App.jsx. The component instance <Sum b={0} /> is no longer needed and should be removed, as the goal was to replace it with <Sum /> to test both default props simultaneously.

Great job addressing the previous feedback, and keep up the fantastic work!


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<Sum a={-5} b={5} />
<Sum a={10} />
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<Sum b={0} />

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This component instance is not listed in the task requirements. The goal was to replace the line that previously tested only one default prop with <Sum /> to test both. You've added <Sum /> correctly on the next line, so this one can be removed.

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