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Copilot AI commented Mar 30, 2026

The Penumbrant Series and Grey Matter Volumes pages were too dense; wording needed to be simpler and more scannable for operators.

  • Penumbrant landing: plainer hero/subtitle, streamlined “About the Series” explainer, tighter five-placement blurbs, and clearer state card summaries.
  • Penumbrant Colorado: concise subtitle and intro framing to emphasize the vice-economy choice.
  • GMV landing: simplified hero subtitle and state teasers; homepage tiles for GMV/Penumbrant updated to match the clearer tone.
  • Copy review follow-ups: refined Penumbrant blockquote and clarified Florida teaser language.

Example snippet:

<p class="ir-subtitle">
  Plain-language breakdowns of where cannabis oversight sits in each state and what that placement means for operators on the ground.
</p>
Penumbrant Papers: https://github.com/user-attachments/assets/4b75563b-578f-44cb-9f91-f6e29bf82938
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Simplify the language across the Penumbrant Series & GMV

Copilot AI changed the title [WIP] Simplify language across the Penumbrant Series and GMV Simplify Penumbrant Series & GMV language Mar 30, 2026
Copilot AI requested a review from clearlineKris March 30, 2026 22:06
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