Merge pull request #589 from w3c/guidelines-suggestions-from-matt

Guidelines suggestions from matt
w3c · Jan 8, 2025 · 26c7d5e · 26c7d5e
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diff --git a/a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html b/a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html
@@ -491,7 +491,7 @@ <h3>Why this information is important for accessibility</h3>
 				<li> The main language of the content enables readers to
 					be confident that they will be able to read
 					with their Assistive Technology that uses
-					synthesized voice or the corresponding Braille
+					synthesized voice or the corresponding braille
 					translation table
 					for the language. </li>
 			</ul>
@@ -1288,7 +1288,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Math formulas in accessible format (MathML)</span>
 						</li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-math-as-latex"
-								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Math formulas in accessible format (LaTex)</span>
+								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Math formulas in accessible format (LaTeX)</span>
 						</li>
 						<li><span
 								data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-math-described"
@@ -1298,7 +1298,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Chemical formulas in accessible format (MathML)</span>
 						</li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-chemistry-as-latex"
-								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Chemical formulas in accessible format (LaTex)</span>
+								data-localization-mode="descriptive">Chemical formulas in accessible format (LaTeX)</span>
 						</li>
 						<li>
 							<span
@@ -1311,7 +1311,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-open-captions" data-localization-mode="descriptive">
 Videos included in publications have open captions</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-transcript" data-localization-mode="descriptive">
-Has a transcript</span></li>
+Transcript(s) provided)</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-unknown" data-localization-mode="descriptive">No information is available</span></li>
 					</ul>
 				</aside>
@@ -1324,15 +1324,15 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 								data-localization-mode="compact">Math as MathML</span></li>
 <li>
 <span data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-math-as-latex"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">Math as LaTex</span></li>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Math as LaTeX</span></li>
 <li>
 <span data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-math-described"
 								data-localization-mode="compact">Math as images with text description</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-chemistry-as-mathml"
 								data-localization-mode="compact">Chemical formulas in MathML</span>
 						</li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-accessible-chemistry-as-latex"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">Chemical formulas in LaTex</span>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">Chemical formulas in LaTeX</span>
 						</li>
 
 <li>
@@ -1346,7 +1346,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 <span data-localization-id="rich-content-open-captions" data-localization-mode="compact">
 Videos have open captions</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-transcript" data-localization-mode="compact">
-Has transcript</span></li>
+Transcript(s) provided)</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="rich-content-unknown" data-localization-mode="compact">No information is available</span></li>
 					</ul>
 				</aside>
@@ -1383,7 +1383,7 @@ <h3 data-localization-id="hazards-title">Hazards</h3>
 			</div>
 
 			<p>Identifies any potential hazards (e.g., flashing
-				elements, loud sounds, and motion simulation)
+				elements, sounds, and motion simulation)
 				that could afflict physiologically sensitive users.</p>
 
 			<div> class="note" <p> Research has not identified a source
@@ -1431,7 +1431,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 								that can cause motion sickness</span></li>
 						<li><span data-localization-id="hazards-sound"
 								data-localization-mode="descriptive">The
-								publication contains loud sounds which
+								publication contains sounds which
 								can be uncomfortable</span></li>
 						<li><span data-localization-id="hazards-unknown"
 								data-localization-mode="descriptive">The presents
@@ -1457,8 +1457,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 								data-localization-mode="compact">Motion
 								simulation</span></li>
 <li><span data-localization-id="hazards-sound"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">Loud
-								sounds</span></li>
+								data-localization-mode="compact">sounds</span></li>
 <li><span
 								data-localization-id="hazards-unknown"
 								data-localization-mode="compact">The presence of hazards is unknown</span></li>
@@ -1691,7 +1690,7 @@ <h4> Display techniques for legal considerations</h4>
 						enable reading in alternative access modes
 
 						(e.g., ruby annotations, sign
-						language, transcript).</p>
+						language, transcripts).</p>
 
 
 
@@ -1708,8 +1707,8 @@ <h4> Display techniques for legal considerations</h4>
 				<dt>Tactile</dt>
 				<dd>
 					<p>For information on content that is available in
-						tactile form (e.g., tactile content, tactile
-						graphic, tactile objects).</p>
+						a tactile form (e.g., tactile content, tactile
+						graphics, tactile objects).</p>
 				</dd>
 
 				<!-- maybe we can remove Content
@@ -1757,7 +1756,7 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 					<ul>
 						<li>ARIA roles included</li>
 						<li>Visible page numbering</li>
-						<li>Tactile graphics attached</li>
+						<li>Tactile graphics included</li>
 <li>No information is available</li>
 </ul>