Update how_we_work.yml

copy edits, remove "untangle" from into paragraph and first value description
usds · Mar 30, 2023 · 6fe166e · 6fe166e
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 page_title:
   heading_title: "How we work"
   heading_text: |-
-     We collaborate with public servants throughout the government to help untangle complex challenges and ultimately deliver a better government experience to people. We work across multiple agencies and bring best practices from our various disciplines.
+     We collaborate with public servants throughout the government to address some of the most critical needs and ultimately deliver a better government experience to people. We work across multiple agencies and bring best practices from our various disciplines.
      
   heading_button_text: "Learn about our mission"
 
 roles_heading_title: "Building a team with a broad range of experiences to transform government."
 roles_heading_text: |-
    With tours of service lasting no more than four years, the U.S. Digital Service brings fresh perspectives on technology and delivery to the government. To build the best possible team, we focus on the same values in our hiring as we do in our work.
 
-   - **Hire and empower great people.** We work to untangle some of our nation’s most important and complex problems. We hire people with the experience, skills, compassion, curiosity, and tenacity to find new paths forward. 
+   - **Hire and empower great people.** We work to address some of our nation’s most critical needs. We hire people with the experience, skills, compassion, curiosity, and tenacity to find new paths forward. 
 
    - **Design with users, not for them.** We build better solutions when our team reflects the people we serve, including people from communities that are traditionally underserved. We hire people from different demographic backgrounds, various industries, and all corners of the United States and its territories. We strongly encourage people who identify as Black, Hispanic/Latinx, Native/Indigenous, women, LGBTQ+, disabled, veterans, and members of other underserved communities to apply.