Rewrite site copy to remove AI-generated writing patterns - #4
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Removes em dashes, fragment-plus-colon-list constructions, rule-of-three
noun lists, and overused vague adjectives ("messy," "real scope,"
"actually") across the homepage, /projects, /about, all project
case-study pages, and three blog posts. Also standardizes the browser
tab title on "Product Engineer" and fixes the hero stat to match the
three company logos actually shown. No layout, component, or data
structure changes — copy only.
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The first copy pass removed em dashes but left balanced semicolon clauses, "not X but Y" contrast framing, and salesy "so if that's what you need" closers in their place — still reads as written, not spoken. Rewrites the hero subhead, capabilities descriptions, about-page body copy, and a few project card blurbs to sound like plain first-person speech instead.
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Removes em dashes, fragment-plus-colon-list constructions, rule-of-three
noun lists, and overused vague adjectives ("messy," "real scope,"
"actually") across the homepage, /projects, /about, all project
case-study pages, and three blog posts. Also standardizes the browser
tab title on "Product Engineer" and fixes the hero stat to match the
three company logos actually shown. No layout, component, or data
structure changes — copy only.