[CS2113-T12-2] Grocery in Time#33
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| * In Ui class, modified the printGrocery method to print the 'location' of the grocery alongside the grocery name. | ||
| * Alternative considered: Can possibly add location as enumeration however different people might store groceries in different places thus better to set as String so that user is free to input location details however specific they want. | ||
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| ### 6. Edit grocery amount after using a grocery |
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Excellent work on UML, however could your show how the user exits the app?
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Looks neat and organized! Perhaps you can an overall sequence diagram for your whole program to show how it works overall.
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Also, class diagrams for classes like Ui, Parser, Grocery would better illustrate and complement your explanations
| * Alternative considered: Can possibly add location as enumeration however different people might store groceries in different places thus better to set as String so that user is free to input location details however specific they want. | ||
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| ### 6. Edit grocery amount after using a grocery | ||
| * A `Grocery` stores its `amount` as an attribute. All `Grocery` objects are then stored in an ArrayList in `GroceryList`, which entirely handles the editing of the `amount`. |
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Curious, is the amount: int referring to quantity of the grocery item? There is also a cost attribute in the Grocery class as mentioned in line 18.
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Diagrams are simplified and easy to understand. Well done!
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The diagrams are quite clear and neat as well as carefully matches the UG. however some of the minor detail seems missing such as after playing the game how the user quite and is it possible to store the information?
| * if `eat`, store the name and calories of the input food | ||
| * if `view`, display all the foods consumed |
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Overall well done! However, there are some missing full stops in the DG.
| * Alternative considered: Can possibly add location as enumeration however different people might store groceries in different places thus better to set as String so that user is free to input location details however specific they want. | ||
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| ### 6. Edit grocery amount after using a grocery | ||
| * A `Grocery` stores its `amount` as an attribute. All `Grocery` objects are then stored in an ArrayList in `GroceryList`, which entirely handles the editing of the `amount`. |
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The diagrams are quite clear and neat as well as carefully matches the UG. however some of the minor detail seems missing such as after playing the game how the user quite and is it possible to store the information?
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Your functionality for each version looks quite precise and straight to the point of what is needed for such product. Goodjob! However is there any other types of users you have to consider to add on other than financially-awre and health-concious, such as alergic to some food?
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your CML interface looks very neat and easily understandable, goodjob! However, one possible adjustment could be align each same component together therefore better observations
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Good use of enumerations! Which is very good executable under this circumstance. Goodjob!
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Generally well written, except for some organizational problems as well as grammatical errors which may cause some confusion.
| * if `eat`, store the name and calories of the input food | ||
| * if `view`, display all the foods consumed |
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Instead of "if eat" and "if view", perhaps it would be clearer to mention which variable fulfils those conditions. It could be phrased as "if command == eat" and "if command == view".
| * if `eat`, store the name and calories of the input food | ||
| * if `view`, display all the foods consumed | ||
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| ### 1. View all groceries added |
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The numbering here is a bit confusing, I am not sure about how the DG is organized, because "Calories Management" was given index 1 earlier, so I am not sure how that fits in.
| * First, create a field in "Grocery" class that stores the cost of a grocery. | ||
| * When adding a grocery, prompt the user to enter the cost. | ||
| * Format the cost into 2 decimal places, remove the dollar sign and store it as a string. | ||
| * Second, the grocery's cost accordingly before adding it into the list. |
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I think there seems to be a grammatical error here which makes the meaning difficult to understand.
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| ### 3. Input category for each grocery added | ||
| * In Grocery class, modified the Grocery constructor to accept the 'category' parameter. |
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Perhaps it's better to phrase it this way, "the Grocery constructor was modified to accept the 'category' parameter".
| * In Parser class executeCommand method, modified the add command to prompt the user for the category of the grocery. Passed the category as a parameter when creating a new Grocery object. | ||
| * In Ui class, added a new method promptForCategory to prompt the user for the category of the grocery. | ||
| * In Grocery class, modified the printGrocery method to include the category information in the output string. |
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The same phrasing issue, try to phrase it in passive voice.
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| ### 5. Input the location of where each grocery is stored | ||
| * In Grocery class, modified the Grocery class to include location (String) as an attribute. |
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Could be clearer if "location" is formatted as code.
| | Version | As a ... | I want to ... | So that I can ... | | ||
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| | v1.0 | new user | see instructions on how to use the app | refer to them when I forget how to use the application | | ||
| | v1.0 | user | add groceries to the app | manage all my groceries | | ||
| | v1.0 | user | view all my groceries | know what I have bought | | ||
| | v1.0 | user | delete groceries from the list | stop tracking those groceries | | ||
| | v1.0 | user | add the amount of a grocery | keep track of the amount of that item I have | | ||
| | v1.0 | user | add the expiration date of the grocery | keep track of when my items expire easily | | ||
| | v2.0 | financially-aware user | add the cost of the groceries | know how much I am spending | | ||
| | v2.0 | health-conscious user | categorise my groceries | know what types of groceries I have | | ||
| | v2.0 | user with many storage spaces | add the location of where an item is stored | see where I keep my groceries | | ||
| | v2.0 | user who consumes groceries | track the usage of my groceries | know how much I have left | | ||
| | v2.0 | user who cooks with recipes | create and keep my own version of recipes | refer to my own recipes when I cook | |
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After going through the user stories, I am not sure how the calories management sequence diagram fits into any of the user stories. Was this missed out or the calories management is a new feature?
| ### 5. Input the location of where each grocery is stored | ||
| * In Grocery class, modified the Grocery class to include location (String) as an attribute. | ||
| * In Grocery class, modified the Grocery constructor to accept the 'location' parameter. | ||
| * In Grocery class, under printGrocery, added locationString to format location. |
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The explainations are relatively accurate and useful, excellant!
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| {Describe the design and implementation of the product. Use UML diagrams and short code snippets where applicable.} | |||
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Better to re-iterate the value proposition of your app at the beginning of the design and implementation section.
| | v1.0 | user | add the expiration date of the grocery | keep track of when my items expire easily | | ||
| | v2.0 | financially-aware user | add the cost of the groceries | know how much I am spending | | ||
| | v2.0 | health-conscious user | categorise my groceries | know what types of groceries I have | | ||
| | v2.0 | user with many storage spaces | add the location of where an item is stored | see where I keep my groceries | | ||
| | v2.0 | user who consumes groceries | track the usage of my groceries | know how much I have left | | ||
| | v2.0 | user who cooks with recipes | create and keep my own version of recipes | refer to my own recipes when I cook | |
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Much better to include a priority tag for each new user story
| * First create a method in "Grocery" class that prints the grocery in a preferred format.\ | ||
| e.g., NAME, AMOUNT, EXPIRATION, PRICE. |
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Can you provide a sample of the formats for all those inputs? (I can see you have already specified the format of expiration, but maybe a sample for all is more intuitive for other developers)
Update PPP and fix PED bugs
Fix bugs related to duplicates and `del` storage locations
Amend my PPP
Add new features and documentation for Grocery in Time project
Update DG and PPP
Add LICENSE.md
Edited Reposense Link
edit ppp again
Update review/mentoring contributions in team/64-1.md
One full stop.
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Users can track and manage their groceries easily. They are reminded of what to buy and what should be used.