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Note that other documents like {{X509.2019}} and {{RFC5280}} use the
term "trusted CA" or "trust anchor" instead of "root CA". This
documents continues using "root CA" based on the above definition
document continues using "root CA" based on the above definition
because it is also present in the ASN.1 syntax that cannot be changed
easily.

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{: id="sect-6.1"}
\[See {{sect-3.1.1.2}} for this document's definition of "root CA".\]

If a newly created root CA is at the top of a PKI hierarchy, it usually produced produce a "self-certificate", which is a
If a newly created root CA is at the top of a PKI hierarchy, it usually
produces a "self-certificate", which is a
certificate structure with the profile defined for the "newWithNew"
certificate issued following a root CA key update.

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{: id="sect-d.3"}

Profile of how a certificate structure may be "self-signed". These
structures are used for distribution of new root CA public keys in a self-signed certificate. This can
structures are used for distribution of new root CA public keys. This can
occur in one of three ways (see {{sect-4.4}} above for a description
of the use of these structures):

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From version 16 -> 17:

* Addressing DISCUSS from Paul Wouters by extending text of Sections 3.1.1.2, 4.4, 5.2.5, 6, and D.3.
* Addressing DISCUSS from Paul Wouters by extending text of Sections 3.1.1.2, 4.4, 5.2.5, 6, and D.3.

* Updated IPSEC -> IPsec


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