Doc: improve locality load balancing doc #238
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Summary of Changes
Hello @Flying-Tom, I'm Gemini Code Assist1! I'm currently reviewing this pull request and will post my feedback shortly. In the meantime, here's a summary to help you and other reviewers quickly get up to speed!
This pull request focuses on enhancing the documentation for Locality Load Balancing in Kmesh. The changes aim to provide a more accurate, clear, and user-friendly guide for understanding and configuring locality-based traffic management, ensuring that users can effectively set up and test these features.
Highlights
- Documentation Clarity: Improved the overall clarity and conciseness of explanations regarding Locality Load Balancing concepts and its implementation within Kmesh.
- Typo and Formatting Corrections: Addressed minor typos (e.g., 'isito' to 'istio') and refined formatting for code blocks and bullet points to enhance readability.
- Enhanced Setup and Testing Instructions: Refined the instructions for preparing the environment, assigning locality information to nodes, and conducting test scenarios, making them more precise and easier to follow.
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This pull request significantly improves the clarity and readability of the locality load balancing documentation. The changes make the text more concise and the instructions easier to follow. The corrections to code block languages and removal of redundant example output are also great improvements.
I've added one suggestion to maintain consistency in the code block language specifiers. There may be other similar instances that were not part of this diff that could also be updated for consistency.
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This is a good clarification. For consistency with other changes in this PR (e.g., on lines 107 and 250), could you also update the language of the following code block from yaml to bash on line 128? The kubectl apply ... <<EOF command is a shell command, so bash is the more appropriate language for syntax highlighting.
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| Delete helloworld-region.zone2.subzone3 and re-apply the development pod as follows, then run test: |
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This sentence has been removed, which is a good cleanup. However, the preceding instruction on line 315 now covers relabeling and redeploying, but it's followed by two separate bash code blocks (one for label and one for delete/apply). For better readability, consider merging these into a single bash block or splitting the instruction on line 315 into two separate steps, each with its own code block.
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