docs: state the facts without arguing for them - #29
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The Security page had picked up a defensive register: a figure introduced by saying it was "not typed into the page", a model described as "not a policy bolted on afterward", network calls "enumerated exactly", a dependency with "nothing to leak because it was never given anything to hold". Each sentence spent words insisting on a point the surrounding fact already makes. Same tic removed from the tracing post: a section headed "A debugging session, not a demo" is now "Debugging a slow turn", and two asides that announced their own honesty now just say the thing.
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Summary
The Security page had picked up a defensive register — sentences spending words insisting on a point the surrounding fact already made:
Same tic removed from the tracing post: "A debugging session, not a demo" → "Debugging a slow turn", plus two asides that announced their own honesty ("worth being honest about", "That's the actual point"). README security section loses "part of the security story" and gains the schedule instead.
No facts changed or dropped.
Test plan
mise run docs:build(strict) passes.