Create Blog “exposing-grafana-service-using-tailscale-for-mks-monitoring-in-hpe-private-cloud-enterprise”

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[choukden]

Hi Guoping,

Thank you very much for your great blog post and contribution to the community!

I have just added one comment for the date of the blog post.

I will engage with Joe Boyle's team (I guess that Kathleen Johnson's team will review your blog post from an editorial standpoint).

THANKS!

Best regards,
Denis

[choukden]

You may want to change the date of blog to October 3, 2025.

[GuopingJia]

Hi Guoping,

Thank you very much for your great blog post and contribution to the community!

I have just added one comment for the date of the blog post.

I will engage with Joe Boyle's team (I guess that Kathleen Johnson's team will review your blog post from an editorial standpoint).

THANKS!

Best regards, Denis

Thanks Denis for your review.

The new patch has changed the date.

Guoping

[mrajkumarmapr]

Language Edits Only

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Change 1:

• Original: "This blog post describes how to expose the Grafana service, running in an MKS cluster"
• Modified: "This blog post describes how to expose the Grafana service running in an MKS cluster"
• Difference: Removed comma after "service" (unnecessary comma before restrictive clause)

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Change 2:

• Original: "Through the integration with"
• Modified: "Through integration with"
• Difference: Removed unnecessary article "the"

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Change 3:

• Original: "The following sections will describe"
• Modified: "The following sections describe"
• Difference: Changed future tense "will describe" to present tense "describe"

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Change 4:

• Original: "from a HPE Private Cloud Enterprise workspace"
• Modified: "from an HPE Private Cloud Enterprise workspace"
• Difference: Changed "a" to "an" (correct article before vowel sound "H")

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Change 5:

• Original: "to securely connects devices"
• Modified: "to securely connect devices"
• Difference: Fixed subject-verb agreement error (connects → connect)

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Change 6:

• Original: "called tailnet"
• Modified: "called a tailnet"
• Difference: Added missing article "a"

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Change 7:

• Original: "through Tailscale's admin console"
• Modified: "through Tailscale's admin console"
• Difference: Fixed escaped apostrophe to regular apostrophe

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Change 8:

• Original: "This makes the applications easily reachable"
• Modified: "This makes applications easily reachable"
• Difference: Removed unnecessary article "the" (referring to applications in general)

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Change 9:

• Original: "found in the blog post"
• Modified: "in the blog post"
• Difference: Removed redundant word "found"

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Change 10:

• Original: "the deployed MetalLB in namespace metallb-system"
• Modified: "the deployed MetalLB in the metallb-system namespace"
• Difference: Added article "the" and reordered for proper English syntax

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Change 11:

• Original: "such as Linux, Windows, MacOS, iOS, Android"
• Modified: "such as Linux, Windows, macOS, iOS, and Android"
• Difference: Corrected "MacOS" to "macOS" (proper Apple capitalization) and added Oxford comma before "and"

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Change 12:

• Original: "It's used"
• Modified: "It is used"
• Difference: Fixed escaped apostrophe and expanded contraction for formal technical writing

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Change 13:

• Original: "It's the bridge"
• Modified: "It is the bridge"
• Difference: Fixed escaped apostrophe and expanded contraction for formal technical writing

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Change 14:

• Original: "using the package avaible from Tailscale download page"
• Modified: "using the package available from the Tailscale download page"
• Difference: Fixed spelling error "avaible" → "available" and added missing article "the"

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Change 15:

• Original: "by choosing the GitHub"
• Modified: "by choosing GitHub"
• Difference: Removed unnecessary article "the" before proper noun

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Change 16:

• Original: "Type below command"
• Modified: "Type the following command"
• Difference: Changed "below command" to "the following command" (proper English usage)

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Change 17:

• Original: "After few minutes"
• Modified: "After a few minutes"
• Difference: Added missing article "a"

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Change 18:

• Original: "the service's IP aaadress stays hidden"
• Modified: "the service's IP address stays hidden"
• Difference: Fixed escaped apostrophe and corrected spelling "aaadress" → "address"

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Change 19:

• Original: "You need also add a node attribute"
• Modified: "You also need to add a node attribute"
• Difference: Corrected word order and added missing infinitive "to"

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Change 20:

• Original: "Create below Ingress YAML manifest file"
• Modified: "Create the following Ingress YAML manifest file"
• Difference: Changed "below" to "the following" (proper English usage)

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Change 21:

• Original: "you can land to one of the pre-configured Grafana dashboard"
• Modified: "you can navigate to one of the pre-configured Grafana dashboards"
• Difference: Changed "land to" to "navigate to" (proper verb usage) and pluralized "dashboard" to "dashboards"

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Change 22:

• Original: "Conclusions"
• Modified: "Conclusion"
• Difference: Changed plural "Conclusions" to singular "Conclusion" (standard section heading)

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Change 23:

• Original: "in MKS clustes"
• Modified: "in MKS clusters"
• Difference: Fixed spelling error "clustes" → "clusters"

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Change 24:

• Original: "this approach offers s simple and secure way"
• Modified: "this approach offers a simple and secure way"
• Difference: Fixed typo "s simple" → "a simple"

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Change 25:

• Original: "it's recommended"
• Modified: "it is recommended"
• Difference: Fixed escaped apostrophe and expanded contraction for formal writing

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Change 26:

• Original: "configure Tailscale to automatically disable Funnel if connection drops"
• Modified: "configure Tailscale to automatically disable Funnel if the connection drops"
• Difference: Added missing article "the"

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[GuopingJia]

Thank you, @mrajkumarmapr, for your review and detailed comments. The latest patch incorporates all your feedback. When you have a moment, please take a look. Much appreciated! - Guoping

[mrajkumarmapr]

An MKS cluster has been provisioned from an HPE Private Cloud Enterprise workspace.
should be:
An MKS cluster has been provisioned from a HPE Private Cloud Enterprise workspace

[mrajkumarmapr]

Use below command to view the details

Use the following command....

[mrajkumarmapr]

After login, you can navigate to one of the pre-configured Grafana dashboards, e.g., Kubernetes/API server.

After logging in....

[GuopingJia]

Thank you, @mrajkumarmapr , for your further review. The latest patch incorporates all these review feedback. - Guoping