revised transcript for accuracy and grammar, reworded some sentences to...#1
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rosexu wants to merge 2 commits intoehashman:sarah-transcriptfrom
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revised transcript for accuracy and grammar, reworded some sentences to...#1rosexu wants to merge 2 commits intoehashman:sarah-transcriptfrom
rosexu wants to merge 2 commits intoehashman:sarah-transcriptfrom
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…to improve clarity
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Hi Rose, Got through the first 300 lines of this... I'm going to have to do this review in parts, and then I'll do one final readthrough at the end. Thanks so much for taking on this initiative! It's looking great thus far!
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…now how to fix it
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...improve clarity.
I've finished editing transcript. I used Sublime to edit the md file and there were some formatting problems with newlines and spaces that occurs after my edits that I don't know how to fix. I would still suggest someone who understood the technical content of the talk to look over it one more time to make sure I didn't edit something wrong.
fun fact: my favourite typo in the original transcript is "pole requests".