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 	<p>Hello, welcome to my homepage. I am a researcher working on AI for precision, personalized, preventative healthcare.</p> 
 	<p>On <a href="https://moreisdifferent.blog/">my Substack</a> I write about 
 	scientific and technological progress, metascience, AI, and other topics. </p>
-	<p>In a previous life studied I physics and graduated with a Ph.D. in physics in 2016.</p>
+	<p>I graduated with a Ph.D. in physics in 2016, and my physics training laid the foundation for my approach to AI, healthcare, biology, and other topics.</p>
 	<p>You can download my <a href="/assets/Daniel_Elton_CV.pdf">full CV here</a>.  </p>
     <p>I love hearing from readers -- please feel free to email me at delton aτ mgh.harvard.edu. You can also leave me anonymous feedback <a href="https://admonymous.co/delton137">here</a>.</p>
 	<p>Here are a few of my internet footprints:</p>