diff --git a/docs/gentle_gis_introduction/introducing_gis.rst b/docs/gentle_gis_introduction/introducing_gis.rst index f1a6c6e2f22..d3fd5d128f4 100644 --- a/docs/gentle_gis_introduction/introducing_gis.rst +++ b/docs/gentle_gis_introduction/introducing_gis.rst @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ of over them. :align: center :width: 30em - GIS Software let you easily change symbology --- the way information is displayed. + GIS Software lets you easily change symbology --- the way information is displayed. .. _figure_map_legend_before: @@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ data associated with places. GIS Systems work with many different types of data. **Vector data** is stored as a series of ``X, Y`` coordinate pairs inside the computer's memory. Vector data -is used to represent points, lines and areas. Illustration :numref:`figure_vector_data` +are used to represent points, lines and areas. Illustration :numref:`figure_vector_data` shows different types of vector data being viewed in a GIS application. In the tutorials that follow we will be exploring vector data in more detail. @@ -256,8 +256,8 @@ tutorials that follow we will be exploring vector data in more detail. :align: center :width: 30em - Vector data is used to represent points (e.g. towns), lines (e.g. rivers) and - polygons (e.g. municipal boundaries). + Vector data are used to represent points (e.g., towns), lines (e.g., rivers) and + polygons (e.g., municipal boundaries). **Raster data** are stored as a grid of values. There are many satellites circling the earth and the photographs they take are a kind of raster data that can be @@ -324,9 +324,9 @@ Here are some ideas for you to try with your learners: areas are. For example a recent satellite image taken during a flood can help to show where people may need rescuing. - - Sometimes people do bad things to the the environment, like dumping dangerous + - Sometimes people do bad things to the environment, like dumping dangerous chemicals that kill plants and animals. Using raster data from satellites can - help us to monitor for these type of problems. + help us to monitor for these types of problems. - Town planners can use raster data from satellites to see where informal settlements are and to help in planning infrastructure.