Merge pull request #9 from nlharris/patch-2

Changed text in "stub" profile to match profile page

Author: eapearson

src/plugin/resources/ProfileWidget/templates/stub_profile.html

@@ -5,18 +5,17 @@ <h3>{{ userRecord.user.username }}</h3>
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 <p class="alert alert-warning">You do not have a public profile yet. Enhance your KBase presence with a public profile.</p>
-<h3>What is a KBase Public Profile?</h3>
-<p>A KBase profile is simply a set of facts about that you that you establish about yourself, including a photo or avatar, your affiliations, the type of work you do, and a personal statement. The profile editor is available to each KBase member, and only a member may change the profile. Changes you make to it are instantly active.</p>
+<h3>What is a KBase Profile?</h3>
+<p>A KBase profile is a collection of information about that you that you supply, including a photo or avatar, your affiliations, the type of work you do, and a personal statement. Only you can change your profile. Changes you make to it are instantly active.</p>
 
-<h3>Who can see the profile?</h3>
+<h3>Who can see your profile?</h3>
+<p>Your profile is is visible to all KBase users via the profile pages and app information pages, and is also potentially accessible to the general public, for example on KBase web pages.</p>
 
-<p>Your profile is is visible to all KBase members and staff through the KBase web applications, and the public at large through the standard public profile viewer page.</p>
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-<h3>Why have a KBase profile</h3>
-<p>Having a profile makes it easier for other users to become familiar with you and your work, and to which facilitates the global knowledge sharing vision of KBase.</p>
+<h3>Why have a KBase profile?</h3>
+<p>Having a profile lets other users become familiar with you and your work, enabling collaboration and advancing the global knowledge sharing vision of KBase.</p>
 
 <div style="text-align: center;">
    <a role="button"  href="#people" type="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-kbase" data-button="create-profile">Visit your Profile Page to create your KBase profile<span class="glyphicon glyphicon-chevron-right" aria-hidden="true"></span></a>
 </div>
 
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