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-## Brand Story of Poset Mage
-Welcome to the expansive universe of "Poset Mage," where the art of magic is redefined through the innovative concept of Partially Ordered Magic (POM). This concept draws inspiration from the mathematical idea of a poset, or partially ordered set. In our universe, this symbolizes a complex yet structured approach to learning and mastering magical skills, akin to navigating a skill tree.
+## What is PosetMage
 
-Each skill in this magical framework is like a node in a vast network, where some skills can be learned in various sequences while others must follow a specific order. This partially ordered structure ensures that all mages, whether beginners or advanced, can strategically plan their paths, enhancing their powers through careful selection and sequencing of spells and abilities.
+What's a **Partially Ordered Set**?
 
-In the world of Poset Mage, magic isn’t simply a collection of spells cast at will but rather a structured network of skills and knowledge that mages must navigate with care and strategic foresight. Each mage’s journey is uniquely shaped by their chosen path through the magic skill tree, where spells and abilities are interconnected in a partially ordered manner. This means that while mages enjoy the freedom to explore diverse magical realms, they must also meet certain prerequisites to unlock more potent and complex spells.
+Imagine you're organizing numbers. You know 1 is less than 3 (1 < 3), and 3 is less than 5 (3 < 5). That means 1 is also less than 5 (1 < 5)!  That's the core idea of a **Partially Ordered Set**.
 
-Sub-Brands of Poset Mage:
+A Partially Ordered Set is just a way to show how things are related, where some things "come before" others. Not *everything* needs to be directly compared – it's like a skill tree in a game. You need some skills before you can get others, but you might be able to choose between different paths.
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+What's **Partially Ordered Magic**?
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+To learn high-level magic, you need to learn low-level magic first. It's a Skill Tree!  The sequence of skills is based on a Partially Ordered Set.  So, Partially Ordered Magic *is* the Skill Tree!
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+**PosetMage**, the Short chant(短縮詠唱)
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+In battle, there's no time for long spells! We need to shorten incantations. PosetMage is about shortening incantations for your Partially Ordered Magic!
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+Sub-Brands of PosetMage:
 
 
 ## <img src="https://posetmage.com/Images/Icon/ShinraMage.svg" Height="22" /> ShinraMage:
 Named after "森羅万象" (Shinra banshō), meaning "all things in nature," ShinraMage is dedicated to ACGN fans, particularly those in **art-related majors**. It merges ACGN culture with creative pursuits like **game design, art, and music**, providing a magical framework for exploring immersive cultural expression.
 
 ## <img src="https://posetmage.com/Images/Icon/LatticeMage.svg" Height="22" /> LatticeMage:
-Inspired by the concept of a lattice, representing interconnected structures, LatticeMage focuses on mastery in the **natural sciences**. Serving professionals and enthusiasts in fields like **physiology, psychology, and neuroscience**, it symbolizes the structured pathways of scientific understanding. LatticeMage embodies the rigor and layered complexity of the natural world.
+Inspired by the concept of a lattice, representing interconnected structures, LatticeMage focuses on mastery in the **natural sciences**. Serving professionals and enthusiasts in fields like **physiology, psychology, neuroscience, etc.**, it symbolizes the structured pathways of scientific understanding. LatticeMage embodies the rigor and layered complexity of the natural world.
 
 ## <img src="https://posetmage.com/Images/Icon/HomunMage.svg" Height="22" /> HomunMage:
 Inspired by the Homunculus, an artificial creation, HomunMage targets those in **applied science majors**. It combines expertise in **AI, programming, and other technological disciplines**, providing a magical framework for innovation and problem-solving. HomunMage embodies the ingenuity of technological creation.